Hi Caleb It sure is an interesting photo and I think you are dead right. The man will be wanting to get away from Corona virus! Good thinking? I wonder what level that man is in? What level do you think he would be in Caleb?
Kia ora Caleb, Well done on doing such a wonderful job with your descriptive writing! I really like the way you have described this image so thoroughly, and think that the descriptive language you have used is fantastic! Describing the fish as looking ‘very curious’ was a great choice as on second glance I can see that all of the fish are staring quite intensely at the tank. It makes me wonder what is going on inside the tank that we can’t see. You mentioned how there is a man staying under the deep blue sea water, and I have to admit that it took me a minute to spot where he was in the image. It almost looks as though he is surrounded by bags. What do you think is in them and why are there so many? Do you think he lives in this house alone? Are these fish his friends, or is he terrified of how big they are? It would be awesome if you could reply to this comment and let me know! I wouldn’t like to live in a fish tank underwater. Even if by some miracle I was able to breathe, I think it might get a little bit too lonely for my own liking. Plus, the fish seem almost as big as the man in the fish tank, so imagine how big the sharks and stingrays would be under the water! Would you ever want to live in this fish tank? Keep blogging, you’re doing great! Nga mihi
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ReplyDeleteIt sure is an interesting photo and I think you are dead right. The man will be wanting to get away from Corona virus! Good thinking? I wonder what level that man is in? What level do you think he would be in Caleb?
Caleb I really enjoyed reading what you have written. You have thought about what you can see in this picture. Good work
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ReplyDeleteKia ora Caleb,
Well done on doing such a wonderful job with your descriptive writing!
I really like the way you have described this image so thoroughly, and think that the descriptive language you have used is fantastic!
Describing the fish as looking ‘very curious’ was a great choice as on second glance I can see that all of the fish are staring quite intensely at the tank.
It makes me wonder what is going on inside the tank that we can’t see.
You mentioned how there is a man staying under the deep blue sea water, and I have to admit that it took me a minute to spot where he was in the image.
It almost looks as though he is surrounded by bags.
What do you think is in them and why are there so many?
Do you think he lives in this house alone?
Are these fish his friends, or is he terrified of how big they are?
It would be awesome if you could reply to this comment and let me know!
I wouldn’t like to live in a fish tank underwater. Even if by some miracle I was able to breathe, I think it might get a little bit too lonely for my own liking.
Plus, the fish seem almost as big as the man in the fish tank, so imagine how big the sharks and stingrays would be under the water!
Would you ever want to live in this fish tank?
Keep blogging, you’re doing great!
Nga mihi